Thank you for the review and especially the concrit. Basically because you (the native speakers) see things that I don't and it helps a lot (see, I'll never do the it thing again because it's stuck in my mind now, as a matter of fact that's how I learned english so thanks). About the typos, are just me being cold and having a killer headache. Sorry about that :P. It will be fix
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Date: 2009-08-17 04:01 pm (UTC)Basically because you (the native speakers) see things that I don't and it helps a lot (see, I'll never do the it thing again because it's stuck in my mind now, as a matter of fact that's how I learned english so thanks).
About the typos, are just me being cold and having a killer headache. Sorry about that :P.
It will be fix